Lazy_Runner
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PLEASE COMMENT HERE WHAT THE NAME OF THE STORE SHOULD BE. FORGOT TO DO THIS AFTER I POSTED THE CHAPTER
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if he were to go to a cultivation world, which one would you recommend?
I like that a lot! i'll wait a couple of days until i start writing the next chapter so that more people have time to comment their worlds (or universes) of choice. if more people want those you cited, then that's the one it'll be. If it isn't, it just means that the MC won't go to them now but in the future.
Are you perhaps brain dead? Offend is a common word in the English dictionary. If you find it weird because it's used a lot in cultivation novels, then it's your fucking problem. I won't stop using a word just because you don't like it.
Before I start, I should say that I'm enjoying your book a lot, so keep on writing and best of luck. Now what I wanted to say is, instead of making a dialogue like this: Leo: No, have you Harry? Make one like this: "No, have you Harry?" Leo asked. You could even add something like "Leo asked with a smile", etc. This is just my opinion though, so feel free to disregard it. Anyway, wishing you the best!