John_Whall

Where did all the death energy from the abomination go??

I understood it as declawing in the films a much more traumatic experience, than just cutting a cats claw (which is the same as have your nails cut)

True it’s a secret but she still isn’t know as miss Grey she is the grey lady a description as she doesn’t approach may if any people and is seen very little (grey as in depressed, deject and sad a grey type of mood)

Your story so far seems good however your leveling system is confusing he levels up but the number goes down it took an extra bit of time to make the connection that higher numbers were worse that in the fight it broke verisimilitude I had to stop reading to make to correction in my head and that broke the flow of the story

The ravenclaw ghost is called the gray lady not ms gray. She is the daughter for Rowena ravenclaw and died to the bloody baron the slytherine ghost. She is Miss Ravenclaw not Ms Gray

loving this please keep it up

First of all wow love the story so far please keep it coming. I like the emotional crisis the protagonist is going through and the mothers rationalisation of it. But and I’m not sure if it comes up later but what if this world existed and was subconsciously seen or shown to the protagonist he wouldn’t have created it just shown it to are world??

This is a great story. The MC has just enough challenge to show growth without to much deus ex machina to help out.however you’re time line is all over the place.

Not isekaied, reincarnated so old life’s age plus new life’s age not carry on at your old life’s age

Overall really good story, I’m just greed for more of it