John_Whall

There are two people in the house that are constantly reading everyone’s (expect MC) mind the pictures don’t need to see the light to other people have seen them and at least one if not both have been antagontised by the MC So how long before the innuendos start

Only read the first few paragraphs and I already love it. Looking at reincarnation through the eyes of someone who rightly thinks are world is one of luxury when compared to a world of live or dead

I must say you write an incredible good Luna

And the harvesting of meat and things??

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No I was thinking why are you calling the indominous Rex (A raptor, T-Rex hybrid) as a T-Rex

I agree good start very organic did not fill forced in anyway, one of the only time were a god like being was reborn and it felt natural, no oh I just happened to have a muguffin that let me try again lucky me

Just keep writing like this and you will definitely meet expectations

This is really well researched and adapted can’t wait for more