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MakimaChan1yrReplied to Kirito_Gaming_9280????
"I know, Evelyn it's just... I've got to do this. I keep losing the things and people I love due to how weak I am and I don't want to ever lose something like that again." I replied with a bit of a twinge in my chest.- MakimaChan1yrCommented
it was a good journey, but sadly the ending isn't what I expected from this level of a novel, but you did good, I might not stick to the very ending but boohoo I'm not really anyone important so nothing will matter of course, thanks for your hard work author I hope you will come up with more interesting and entertaining story, I'll be looking forward to it.
Ch 426 Plan of Action - MakimaChan1yrCommented
Honestly this book is unique to say the least , the grammar is better than most story in this app, and the short flashbacks is refreshing to say the least ,so no need to acknowledge the haters, because enjoying what you do is first priority .
please drop some motivational quotes or some shit.detailDimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)Anime & Comics · SlimeSage - MakimaChan1yrReplied to Knight_RikuCh 45 Chapter 45
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....did the quality dropped or was I just blind in the beginning
"Now that all of this is done, Kukuku.. What should I do with my Brother." I said, while I grinned widely, mixed with my bloodied hand, I was looking completely terrifying! - MakimaChan1yrCommented
.....too fast
"You two are really compatible and make a good team," Blaize commented. - MakimaChan2yrPosted
WQ : 3s :As far as 20 chapters go, It's pretty bad, it's hard to read, though near the 20 chapter mark it was getting better, and I hope it gets better. SD : 4s : It's a pretty good pace, not too slow and not so fast , enjoyable to say the least. CD : 4s : It's good, like, it's better than most . US : 5s : Based off of the dates, I can say it's pretty stable WB : 4s : I haven't explored much, since 20 chapters is not that of a long one, so all I can give is 4 star, and it was pretty good for an earlier chapter. So overall review is 4s. All right, that's my honest review, it was a good ride author, goodluck with the story.
- MakimaChan2yrCommentedCh 20 Chap 20
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Her* her*
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Yeah, no, I need to really use my brain cells to read your work author, or else I wouldn't understand the story, making me read stuff that is just going to waste my time ain't gonna help me understand your story better.
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She* herself* her*
He said repositioning himself and raising his training sword towards me. - MakimaChan2yrCommented
Her*
Lou said as I showed him my progress up to this point. - MakimaChan2yrCommented
She * she*
He said as he watched Ane walk out of the field. - MakimaChan2yrCommented
"I'll kill you" fits more than "Dead" in this scenario, and this is in English, not Japanese, don't make it like its "Shineeee!!!" it doesn't work.
"You bastard. Deaaaaaaad." - MakimaChan2yrCommented
Is that a name???? Aunaue?
This paragraph has been deleted. - MakimaChan2yrCommentedCh 14 Chap 14