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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Agian, in THE future.

    That's why he decided to be serious about it, and his resolution became even stronger after seeing Lilly working so hard for his sake. He didn't want something to happen to her in future because he was weak.
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    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Help me in THE future.

    "It's fine. You can fight me however you want. Even if you seriously injure me, I won't blame you. Moreover, I'll be grateful to you. After all, I want real fighting experience which will help me in future." He said resolutely with determination in his eyes.
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    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Replied to Blizzard54k

    Your welcome. I'm sorry to say that I won't be finishing since it seems that web novel got rid of the fast pass system, so I won't be reading past the last unlocked chapter. I not going to say this is the best thing I ever read but considering everything this is pretty good and you should feel proud of it.

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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    You mean no ONE can object to their relationship. (don't sweat it,if it makes you feel better, out of the few stories I have read on here from first time authors, your is pretty light on spelling and/or grammatical errors.)

    Lilly froze for a second. She vaguely understood his meaning. If she wanted to marry him, she needed enough strength so that no can object to their relationship. She then nodded toward him.
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    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    1. take out the first you in "Hehe, how can I believe you what you say?" 2. It should be "She sent HER mana inside his body", not "She sent HIS mana inside his body".

    "Hehe, how can I believe you what you say? Let me check for myself." Madam Mari walked toward him and touched him on the shoulder as she sent his mana inside his body. After taking a look, she was astounded.
    altalt
    Strongest Mage with the Lust system
    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Did you mean it to read, "as YOU want"?

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    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    "Eva smiled at HER seductively"... cough, him, cough.

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    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    He has breasts?

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    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Minor Nitpick but how else are you going to learn right, anyway the way you phrased it (His smile widened and kissed me again)makes it sounds like his smile is what kissed her this and the last tie and not him, so I would add the word he after the and so it reads, "his smile widened and HE kissed me again".

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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    What she what do for him...

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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Get Dressed ----- Got Dressed

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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Never felt this better before.

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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    I'm sure he liked them but think you meant to say he licked them.

    Max directly went and groped her boobs with one hand each. He was unable to grope them in one hand. He started squeezing them and them brought his face close to one of them and liked her nipple and started to suck on it while he kept rubbing her other breast.
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Wow, a TOW star mage!

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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    the word your looking for is disobey.

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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Do you mean haven't?

    "Oh right, I have given you permission to enter there. I'll go there myself, since you won't even know what to pick there."
    altalt
    HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    You can have him lie to his girlfriend but he feels nothing about telling the truth to her parents in front of her.

    "Yes, I am. My actual age is around 12. My brain development was faster that any normal people. So I finished my muggle education fast and decided to try doing business."
    altalt
    HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    Well if that's how you feel then why don't you tell her the imaginary dead grandma is made up too, you hypocrite.

    2)Now, if you're not a fool to spout out everything and you still don't want to lie, then you can forget about truly getting close to them. Would you love and trust someone who doesn't return that trust back to you? It would have a lot of drama, like- 'Hey, I can't tell you the reason behind these absurd things but I need you to trust that I'm not some dark wizard trying to sacrifice you. I'm keeping these secrets for our own good.'
    altalt
    HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Replied to Ice_Wielding_Ronin

    Because this is not a legit reason but some flimsy excuse that doesn't even work since no one asked for his life story. It would be different if he had to lie about his alter ego but there is little to no risk for him revealing it to her.

    1) Be a fool and spout all the truth about yourself:
    altalt
    HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • experiment0789
    experiment07891yr
    Commented

    I just don't get why he feels he need to lie here, he can keep the old grandma stuff, but taking a potion so a young orphan can deal in more adult matters so he can improve his life is too hard to believe... yeah, like I said why can't he tell the truth to her?

    P.S. A bit of Chris's explaination is still pending. It expands more on why he had to lie more. So, if you feel uncomfortable with the dishonesty here, then be at ease. I'm busy at the moment so I posted this much. So, 'hang' in there!
    altalt
    HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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