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Agian, in THE future.
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Your welcome. I'm sorry to say that I won't be finishing since it seems that web novel got rid of the fast pass system, so I won't be reading past the last unlocked chapter. I not going to say this is the best thing I ever read but considering everything this is pretty good and you should feel proud of it.
You mean no ONE can object to their relationship. (don't sweat it,if it makes you feel better, out of the few stories I have read on here from first time authors, your is pretty light on spelling and/or grammatical errors.)
1. take out the first you in "Hehe, how can I believe you what you say?" 2. It should be "She sent HER mana inside his body", not "She sent HIS mana inside his body".
Did you mean it to read, "as YOU want"?
"Eva smiled at HER seductively"... cough, him, cough.
He has breasts?
Minor Nitpick but how else are you going to learn right, anyway the way you phrased it (His smile widened and kissed me again)makes it sounds like his smile is what kissed her this and the last tie and not him, so I would add the word he after the and so it reads, "his smile widened and HE kissed me again".
What she what do for him...
Get Dressed ----- Got Dressed
Never felt this better before.
I'm sure he liked them but think you meant to say he licked them.
Wow, a TOW star mage!
the word your looking for is disobey.
Do you mean haven't?
You can have him lie to his girlfriend but he feels nothing about telling the truth to her parents in front of her.
Well if that's how you feel then why don't you tell her the imaginary dead grandma is made up too, you hypocrite.
Because this is not a legit reason but some flimsy excuse that doesn't even work since no one asked for his life story. It would be different if he had to lie about his alter ego but there is little to no risk for him revealing it to her.
I just don't get why he feels he need to lie here, he can keep the old grandma stuff, but taking a potion so a young orphan can deal in more adult matters so he can improve his life is too hard to believe... yeah, like I said why can't he tell the truth to her?