It's awesome I can easily follow along the plot line. I have just recently joined but from comments and the authors responses the author tries the best they can to get out an update at least every month. (I hope things can get better and they can write more often) I can easily imagine the world background with how things are layed out. As they are only 17 chapters I don't know about story development. I think it's great and that people just need to be patient.

As a Writer I feel you although I don't go to college or even work

please write soon I am already hooked onto the book and awaiting more.