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It would work if it was Destiny though
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Sometimes haki is referred to as spiritual power, so, I went a bit further with the whole special soul and made it special haki.
no, I just dropped it because of the trash quality. I might remake it later though. I'm now making a One Piece fanfic because it has more content, making it a much longer story overall.
I don’t usually like to complain about stories; But author, Akira was saying in the first chapter that this quirk has a lot of potential that he can abuse, but you haven’t shown how he is abusing his quirk to get smart or stronger, he is just versatile with clear flaws that can be abused if the person knows his quirk, like what almight did. Then there is how you got the quirk wrong, you can say he has a different quirk but you are changed the quirk. The original new order quirk lets you set rules on anything as long as you utter the name of the subject and touch the subject, then you can think of anything you want to happen. It’s not how you depict it where you have to touch the subject and then utter what you want to happen to the subject
Hahahaha, “rose in heart”, hahahahahaha