… paralysis

A really good story, good character development, most semi major characters have it at least a little and it helps make them feel more realistic, with how no one is perfect and how most major antagonists aren’t just one dimensional bad guys. Most of them are smart, which can challenge the mc through a battle of wits, and some seemingly one dimensional antagonist can actually make you feel some sympathy for them. The mc is pretty intelligent and cautious, using his knowledge of the game and his class to make plans, and usually always has a plan. He isn’t op from the start, but he quickly grows stronger. Also the beginning few chapters make you sympathize with him and understand his motives better. The world of this novel is a mixture of multiple genres sci-fi, fantasy, apocalypse, etc. This gives it a separate identity from most novels. Also the world in this novel is pretty dark and realistic considering what happened to the world. All in all, it’s a pretty good novel and the only thing I can say I don’t like much is how long some fights take, I mean one of those fights lasted like 20+ chapters , I mean it’s ok and not all fights are like that, but it can really just slow down the pacing.

Mc may not be harmed by the magic he introduced, but he pretty much gave everyone in the north a gun, and he is trusting them not to go around shooting their guns at innocent people. Sure most people wouldn’t shoot the innocent, but a couple people may get drunk on power and start shooting willy nilly, sure he won’t be harmed, but everyone else is free game. Obviously he didn’t give them guns, but it’s probably worst, considering how powerful magic really is.

Makes sense considering he most likely completed most quests, which means he has helped people before with little reward in return, but to be honest it matters how you play Skyrim, one person may actually care about their actions, another person/ everyone (at one point in time) murders entire cities without remorse, so it matters how the mc played Skyrim before this.

Couldn’t find the right one.

Awe yes the wildly famous bird black bolt.

First… somehow no one had commented in the past year.

Glad we got a real chapter

Force healing, a covenant plot device in the movies and this book (most likely if he was taught how to)

Doesn’t he already have that.

??? Why would she even want to do that? I mean I understand she wants to get out of Wills shadow, but she has no experience in running a studio, the studio can conflict with Wills, the studio will make them even more separated with June now having to act and run a studio at the same time, and it’s probably going to be funded by Will, at least for the start, defeating the whole reason she made the studio, to not need Wills help any more.

… really, and the system couldn’t do this before? It seems like one of the most important things a system can give its users.

Go away system, no one likes you.

Mc is a idiot, just run away and not talk with the suicidal man, like he had a couple seconds to run.

This seems, you know illegal, I don’t think companies should be allowed to get away with torture, as even though it’s in vr the players would still feel everything happen to them, and give them ptsd, as shown with the mc here.

This would actually be funny if this whole interaction wasn’t so forced.

Well here’s a simple solution to this fight, it’s called using yours skill points, he has hundreds of them and can use them any time he wants. Like at this point you should just suspect the mc of a game novel to save up their skill points ’just in case I need to use them in a pinch’ well you idiot you wouldn’t need to use them in the first place to get out of a pinch if you already used them to strengthen yourself. Oh, but what if he needs a lot of strength at the moment but he doesn’t have any skill points to use, well to answer that if he did have those state points to spend on strength then the mc would have a unbalanced character with to much of one stat. So, all in all I don’t understand why all mc’s in game novels save up their skill points, as they wouldn’t need to use them if they were already used before a battle occurs, and if needed it would create a unbalanced character who is a one trick pony.

My question is why the author even made this arc, it pretty much just shows us that Will is a bad planner… so this arc was just useless filler so the author can work on his other novels.