Phanto_Tora
Currently writing The Demon's Game which is to come out someday.
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Phanto_Tora1yrReplied to TreacherousVoid- Phanto_Tora1yrCommentedIgnoring the first reward, the second one was what caught his attention. A random G-Rank item? Even now, Rin was basically 'itemless' except for a pair of normal daggers he got from the weaponry in his home.
- Phanto_Tora1yrCommentedThis one was Claire, she was Marcus's older step-sister. Yup, I am not even kidding, his step-sister. Now, before some of you start moving your right hand, let me explain.
- Phanto_Tora1yrReplied to Gy_F6
Would you like the description of a joke?
[Do not forget: dying here will mean actual death.] - Phanto_Tora1yrReplied to Tronn
What insightful information <3
[Do not forget: dying here will mean actual death.] - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
The MC's first victims :)
"Looks like he's pretty talented, too. A young boy, well-educated, and talented? Hoh…I bet some dirty noble will love him," the other man said. - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
In the real world, this would be politically and morally unspeakable and illegal... But this isn't the real world! Bring in the harem!
[Do not forget: dying here will mean actual death.] - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
They hadn't even tried to play it yet, smh
If the game rating were available, it would have gotten the lowest score in the market. - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
Too many names
"Cleaning up the small fries isn't necessarily an easy thing. The Old Sir is just too lazy to kill them all." Barbatos, the town's blacksmith, lifted his mithril hammer. "But, I have to agree. Pounding wolf heads instead of iron ingots is a good change of pace." - Phanto_Tora1yrReplied to Manhua_Realm
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Zach, 18 years old, has black hair, golden eyes, a little bit taller than the teenagers on his age, a perfect body build, and an attractive smile as well as an arrogant smirk. He lived with his mother and little sister. His school reports were above average, but nothing extraordinary. He was just a normal high school student— or so he looked like, but he was hiding a big secret from the world. He had no life goals, and he wanted to take care of his sister and mother. - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
Skills include (but not limited to): Sugar Mommy, Summon Yandere, Emotional Support, Tactical Advantage Over Virgins
[Husband Of Deathwill Sisters.] - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
Xx_EliteCODSniper_xX
[Choose your nickname.] - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
Already doing better than most protags
Alex brightly smiled at his girlfriend, who was about to fly abroad. Due to her family's matters, Olivia was forced to choose between her mother and father. - Phanto_Tora1yrReplied to Maginus_Sama
This guy:
"Seems like yesterday night I went easy on you. Come here you…" - Phanto_Tora1yrCommentedThey all let out miserable screams as they felt like their skin, muscles, and bones were tearing from inside out. It was the pain of their soul tearing apart. Soon they turned into dust and became one with the air with nothing left as proof of their deaths.
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I do wish I could write a good review of this one since I've spent so much time reading it, and I was certainly enjoying it for the first 500 chapters, but it fell off immensely. This writing quality was never anything to write home about. I don't mind the slightly below-average novel writing style. It can be bad and it can be good. If you don't like super basic and occasionally confusing writing then you may want to try to avoid this. The story itself... What can I say? It's pretty generic. If you were to look at any other cultivation manga, especially the ones that already had an online game element similar to SAO, only the characters, locations, and some smaller aspects are unique; even then some of the characters feel highly inspired by other generic character stereotypes. Barely unique, but not exactly blatantly ripping anything off. Here's the thing that made me drop the novel; the filler-like chapters. The author decided to make many super filler-like chapters (around 500 to 600) that are certainly filler, but they contain story elements that you'd want to know. It becomes so taxing to read dozens of unnecessary chapters just to build something about the characters that we already know about. I've had so many moments where I'm ready for the next chapter to be the chapter where everything starts getting exciting, but seemingly every single time that I move on to the next chapter, I got disappointed and I have an extreme urge to just drop everything and find something else to read. Of course, it does get better and back on track, but it's so painful reading nearly 100 chapters that aren't tagged filler. They have minuscule amounts of an actual story so you have to read them without getting confused when you decide to skip to the exciting parts where there isn't casual talking, random throw-ins of characters that add barely anything to the story other than just being there. If I were to write this review before I read chapters 500-600, I would have given it a solid 4.2 score; mainly only getting damaged by writing quality. I truly did enjoy it at first, but I just couldn't hold onto a failing story where I just can't continue due to the immense falling quality. It's as if the author is just putting the first thing they think about onto the page without fine-tuning anything.
- Phanto_Tora1yrReplied to Reckoning3000
Fear makes those on the path of righteousness stray away from the right path... I pity his soul...
In this previous life, Rudy only masturbated when he was alone at the house. However, the house was always full after Rebecca remarried. - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
Now this is what I'd call overpowered.
But, something was different. Her clothes looked fine in the camera, but they looked transparent when he glanced at Reina. - Phanto_Tora1yrCommented
Nah, Truck-kun didn't fail. They're starting to get corrupt... Truck-kun is making it slow and painful... My god...
"Most of his bones are shattered. And his broken ribs punctured his lugs, and his neck also cracked on impact. It's a miracle that he is still alive, but after looking at his condition, I wonder if…" the doctor sighed and continued, "I will be serious with you. He is beyond saving, and he can die anytime." - Phanto_Tora1yrCommentedRudy was hit by the truck passing at full speed.