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It is reasonable for Asnards to not invade Lanir, since they are law-abiders. It is just suspicious that the Lanir just let a ticking timebomb near them. If I am the king of Lanir, then I would befriend the vampires secretly and bait them with sweet revenge. I will support them and try to lengthen the war. It is full of merits on our part, since the Asnards will not criticize us much, since it is a 'righteous' war they created by angering the vampires. When they are tired, we will attack. Anyway, good job author. I gave you the title of Best Namer and Best World-Builder.
I want to know why the humans just let the Arands dominate or they also have a plan for this?
Author is it possible that the werewolves just thought of the idea of eliminating vampires or they have an established plan already and just waiting for the perfect chance.
yup, noted
Minor errors. I recommend grammarly. I pass my novels to grammarly first before I publish. Check satisfactory
It's pretty obvious who is this, don't you think? Its Th*spoiler*deus! Sheesh! Don't say to author-san that I spoiled it.
Check this author. I think this sentence is already said.
Hi author-san, I am late by 7 days to your review swap, but it's better late than a dishonest man. Good grammar. I would like the archaic word 'hearken' to be replaced by a softer word 'listen' since it is so archaic if you know what I mean. Check the archaic words pls. I like the characters and you are so much better than me in naming. I wish to learn from you. I am still reading Chapter 1, so it is still early to comment about the plot.
Write a reviewww... If you don't, then you will be single forever or your partner will leave you since you do not contribute to the awesome author-san. HaHaHa!!! Just kidding. Heyo, Death Porkers, Author-san is here! Clap! Cla- Forget it. I have a mother who suffered from a heart-attack. I'm not kidding. She already has a sickness and she still eats lipids with high cholesterol. Then I think that I wanna kill those meat-lovers. This world is rotten! I shall be the God of this new world free from fats and populated by those who I judged vegetarian. Yup, basically, that's that. See you next time!
The novel will have frequent revisions until reaching chapter 20. Here is what to expect: 1) A revision of Chapter 4. To induce anger to the main character, his lover will be chained and k*l**d. The female character will be highlighted as a strong faithful woman. The inappropriate scenes will be erased. 2) The novel will dabble in romance with kissing as the maximum limit of intimacy. If you do not want the limit, then wait for the official serialization of the I.B.A. PHOBIA. 3) Every important character will have a corresponding gem, flower, or object as a representation of their character. After chapter 20, only minor revisions will be made like grammar, and other stuff that do not affect the story line. Major revisions will only be made if a scene is seriously problematic.
Please elaborate if you like it or not. It may be cliche or outright cringy, so leave a review.
Announcement Readers! I have done a major debugging in the first five chapters. Check it out! 1. Erase the redundant "Chapter * - " 2. Modified the code and the dream in Chapter 1 to be relevant in the story line. 3. Erased Chapter 4's shameful sound. I am very sorry for this chapter especially for the female readers. I will write an author's thoughts for the reason why I wrote it and its importance. 4. Modified something here and there. Hehe. Its only minor modifications, by the way. 5. Added Chapter 6. 4. Modified something here a
I already done it. Check it out! Thank you for noticing!
I do not know if you like it, but I can change it if you like. I planned to make it as her trademark, but the readers are the boss so just leave a review.
Thanks. I remember that there is a red line below the word, but I did not notice what's wrong with it. "Time froze." does not sound right, so I put a 'd'. Thank you so much!