LoftyT15
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I was goin to talk about this in a few chapters talking about future plans. I want to wirte my own novel, exploring what I wan to explore and with characters I want to create to continue improving as a writer. I dstarted this novel in the one piece world because is a setting thgat I lik a lot and it helps me have a sense of direcction while getting started. For th future its true that I want to create my own places where the story continues and oriinal charcters because I want to explore creating myself instead of following whats already done. Still, there are many characters from one piece that I want to give important roles in the story. Shanks, Mihawk, big mom, katakuri, Imu, celestial dragons... I want to explore this things but at the end of the day I want this to be my novel, following my own path. If that's something you dont like thats tottaly fine, I already made my mind that many people wont like it, but still i want to do it be it for better or worse. If you want to give it a chance then I would be thankfull.
A little rant about the story's future. I'm not planning for Yasu's fire to be just that, I want to explore it in depth and make try keep it intresting. I dont want to give him a df for various reasons. For starters, exploring to complicated things from a writing perspective I feel that it would make in the end making both mediocre. Kind of like the man who chases two rabbits catches neither. Also, one thing I admire from oda's writing is how he manages to give depth to all the main crew andmake them all relevant. I want to try and have a main crew (not big) and write them all with a purpose and that they compliment each other. Some with a df and some without like Yasu and make their abilites (not only combat foused) mix and compliment each other hopefully avoiding things going stale. Long rant but that what I want to explore, I'm very sorry if thats something you're not interested in, but I want to try and make it work and I would say that you give it a chance if you want and maybe you like it. Thanks
I'm not going to rely on a df for things to not grow stale, thats lazy writing. I want to improve my writing, make better plot lines, good character, interesting stakes. I don't want to rely on a df for that
There are discord we're you could probably get ideas, im sorry but my story is not one of those places 😅
Nah, if Emma messes with armament haki then why not make ame no habakiri mess with observation haki. With the Yasu thing, he just didn't have the head in the game so to speak