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This is a great Chinese fanfic, both female protagonists (Sharon and Audrey) are the icing on the cake. The protagonist is intelligent, not a brainless idiot. Mostly there is no stupid Chinese nationalism in this fanfic nor Chinese elements in it. The MC himself does not participate in the Tarot Club, which is a shame, but making up for this, the protagonist creates a club of External Gods and then invites other gods on Earth.
Great Britain has no Capital, it is the island itself. England is one of the countries located in Great Britain. The United Kingdom is the union of England and other countries. I.e: Great Britain = Island. England = A country located on the Island of Great Britain. United Kingdom = formed by England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland.
Sorry, I didn't realize that I had written in Portuguese before. I was in doubt because of the maid outfits that both of the Count's daughters wore, even though they were children of a nobleman as important as a Count. In addition, three-year-old girls don't speak as formally and are still learning to speak correctly. In fact, other noble women would only serve other more powerful noble women. It was very common for queens to be accompanied by numerous other noble women.
Algo está errado, mulheres nobres que serviam outras mulheres nobres ainda eram nobres. Eles se vestiam como nobres e, na maioria das vezes, conversavam entre si. Esses capítulos mais recentes estão cheios de inconsistências flagrantes, especialmente no que diz respeito às gêmeas de três anos, filhas de um EARL.
Funny, a demon named after an apostle of Jesus, is that a reference? I think the name Judas would have been better, meaning revenge and the protagonist's rebirth.
I think you overestimate Toji, yes, the man was stronger than 99% of the characters, but remember that even with Gojo exhausted and tired, he managed to repel every time he attacked, without Gojo being fully enlightened, when Gojo lightened up, Toji didn't even manage to land a hit from Gojo, so I don't understand so much adoration for the man.
Author, I am apprehensive, you are putting too much pressure on the protagonist who has just entered Hogwarts and has now received his inheritance. Grindelwald, Voldemort, each with a cult of powerful people against a thirteen year old boy. Honestly, I don't see how Harry will make it out alive without all of Gojo's powers. I would like to receive an answer, but if it's too much trouble forget it, I'll suffer from anxiety alone... Harem: Susan, Hermione, Tonks and LUNA!!!