As he stood amidst the carnage, the corrupted horn in his grip, Skarbrand knew he was one step closer to his ultimate goal. The power he sought was within his grasp, the path illuminated by his triumph. His journey was far from over, his thirst for power yet unquenched. But he was undeterred. For in the realm of chaos, only the relentless survive.
I would love to have an editor. It makes this so much easier. But sadly none are free and people have to income somehow. If you know anyone willing to do this for free comment below.
Thanks for the feedback l will try to rewrite the perivous chapters and then the others. But l do not have the current luxury of Grammarly it is a subscription thing the free verison doesn't do much and I'm broke. Like major broke.
But amidst the shadows of despair, a flicker of something else began to stir within Skarbrand's shattered being. A tiny ember of hope, like a forgotten flame in a desolate cavern, sparked to life. It danced in the darkness, casting a faint glow that illuminated the recesses of his soul. With each passing moment, the ember grew brighter, its warmth thawing the icy tendrils of rage that ensnared him.
But amidst the shadows of despair, a flicker of something else began to stir within Skarbrand's shattered being. A tiny ember of hope, like a forgotten flame in a desolate cavern, sparked to life. It danced in the darkness, casting a faint glow that illuminated the recesses of his soul. With each passing moment, the ember grew brighter, its warmth thawing the icy tendrils of rage that ensnared him.
As soon as l opened webnovel l met by a mass swam of comments, you have great points and design ideas like them. The Mc is based on Valentino but with my own twist. Continue the good work!