Supremeking92

Hi author, I am creating my own novel can you give me feed back. It’s called “rise of the primordial devourer “ As well as how to improve my writing skills.

This novels has lots of potential, I hope the author doesn’t drop it too soon like most new authors do. I can’t too much about the world building because it’s too early to judge. However the author created a mini arch to introduce the Mc and how he handles things, showing that the MC is smart and manipulative, and he would do anything to get what he wants. As for the writing quality… it’s ok, I can understand that the author must have recently started to upload his story, I hope the author improves his writing quality as he uploads.

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I like the start but just needs more chapters and I can see this novel becoming really popular. Author please don’t give up on the novel.