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FeralNeko3 years ago
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Reading the synopsis, I thought that this would be an interesting spin to the usual system novel-- and it is! Keep up the good work, author!
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Fantasy · Wicked_Snail
FeralNeko3 years ago
Posted
Tejeda is a mood, and his attitude really stands out in the tension-filled setting of the story. First chapter and I already got a laugh out of this awesome piece of treasure.
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FeralNeko3 years ago
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a.
It was different when she was younger. She treated him no differently than anyone else. But as she got older, and he began to develop feelings for her, began treating her differently and she began treating him differently as well. If he had a secondary goal, it would be to gain Ari's acknowledgment once more. For her to show him her actual smile and not the polite one, she showed everyone else. For her to crack jokes and laugh around him as she did as a child.
Search: Falling Stardust (book Moved... again... sigh... I'm sorry)
Fantasy · WhiteVest
FeralNeko3 years ago
Commented
a.
It was different when she was younger. She treated him no differently than anyone else. But as she got older, and he began to develop feelings for her, began treating her differently and she began treating him differently as well. If he had a secondary goal, it would be to gain Ari's acknowledgment once more. For her to show him her actual smile and not the polite one, she showed everyone else. For her to crack jokes and laugh around him as she did as a child.
Search: Falling Stardust (book Moved... again... sigh... I'm sorry)
Fantasy · WhiteVest
FeralNeko3 years ago
Commented
a.
It was different when she was younger. She treated him no differently than anyone else. But as she got older, and he began to develop feelings for her, began treating her differently and she began treating him differently as well. If he had a secondary goal, it would be to gain Ari's acknowledgment once more. For her to show him her actual smile and not the polite one, she showed everyone else. For her to crack jokes and laugh around him as she did as a child.
Search: Falling Stardust (book Moved... again... sigh... I'm sorry)
Fantasy · WhiteVest
FeralNeko3 years ago
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this is a long-a.s.s. paragraph
Saxon shook his head at this statement. "This proposal will bring more harm than good. Who says we are powerful enough to challenge the wilderness ourselves? And us charging into the wilderness will have the opposite effect. The other powers will see that we have an advantage, that we are ahead of them and in a bid to catch up. They will storm the wilderness with no fear of consequences. These member states' greatest fear is falling so far behind us and the Devos Family in strength that they lose speaking rights at the table and become puppet states. If they have no deterrent, what's stopping us from taking their provinces for ourselves or say, "do as I say or I will kill you?" them teaming up against us is their only trump card. If the strength gap widens and this is no longer an option, they will become desperate."
Search: Falling Stardust (book Moved... again... sigh... I'm sorry)
Fantasy · WhiteVest
FeralNeko3 years ago
Commented
im a cat person so . . .
Alexi gulped and wiped a bead of sweat that formed on his brow. "I... I suggest we move first, launch an invasion, set up our outpost, and return to Henosis with a report of our findings. If the energy beasts and whatever else is out there is as powerful as we fear. When the others see what they are up against, they will think twice about setting foot in the wilderness without adequate strength."
Search: Falling Stardust (book Moved... again... sigh... I'm sorry)
Fantasy · WhiteVest
FeralNeko3 years ago
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okay, uh, i know the chapter is them planning some stuff so info being thrown about like this is . . . necessary i guess? i hope they arent too important because i understood barely anything. but . . . really, theyre the only ones who understands what theyre talking about
Stormy wasn't an inappropriate name for a young man such as himself, so Ari took it upon herself to name him Alexi Von Creig.
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Fantasy · WhiteVest
FeralNeko3 years ago
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jjsanxkzkan infodump
"It's been almost ten years since you've developed and distributed the breathing techniques and other mana manipulation methods. During this time, it has found its way to every corner of the continent and is solely responsible for the increased strength of Henosis. Even with this, have we not bought enough goodwill from the Henosis member states? Are their greed so strong that they will disregard even this?" Gin spoke in disbelief.
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Fantasy · WhiteVest
FeralNeko3 years ago
Commented
. . . please give me action TvT
"Next item, we made a decision as to how we will colonize the wilderness. Through the black plains owned by Dan Avon and the Great Divide owned by us as the Endless Tundra is impassible for an entire army to traverse. The other powers, including the Devos Province, will gain access to the wilderness by marching their armies through our province. There is the issue of their territory being split between large swaths of land, making it impossible to be managed by a single person."
Search: Falling Stardust (book Moved... again... sigh... I'm sorry)
Fantasy · WhiteVest

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