thank you very much

you captured the scene perfectly.

another author shamelessly giving his own work a review. I just wanna make one thing clear everyone. No, I have never done this before. Do I read novels? Not that much either. I will be honest with you the reason I'm writing this novel is that I dream of having an own manga/anime. Since my drawing is really bad I decided to do the next best thing is write down my story in novel format. feel free to criticize all you want. I am also not a native English speaker so expect a lot of mistakes and not many complex words.

I'm extremely sorry for not responding. I was absent from the internet. I would like to join