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kyle_trolt

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2021-02-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • kyle_trolt
    kyle_trolta year ago
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    another op character novel that gets everything handed too him.im amazed that at 40ch he isn't killing gods .boring

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    kyle_trolt3 years ago
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    you got an original character and he knows what's going to happen but does nothing to change it. the mc feels like a random mob character without a personality. the only thing we know is that he likes sweet blond chicks. the walking dead is a series is about surviving. by adding a system store with seemingly everything free it makes surviving too easy and with Al the weapons and food he can seemingly shit out you remove the feeling of surviving that was what the show is about. and ontop of that the oc character has almost no dialogue he's like the weird kid who stays on the fringes of the group and just listens and Never speaks. not even inner monologue nothing the only +is there aren't any grammar mistakes. complete wast of time.