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Great story so far, please keep writing.

this fanfic has potensial, be a good keeper, please keep writing.

thanks for the chapter

keep going, this fanfiction is very good so far👍👍👍👍

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thank you for the chapter

Hi, the charter was pretty good, but you should try to maybe check your . and , and maybe cut the writing in to sections, if you understand what i men, other than That, good job, keep going👍

i like it👍