Sarada or an Oc

Que buen inicio, me encantó la historia

More chapters please?

All thanks to u

Good, extremely so. The Characters are fleshed. And funny persons (in a crude way)Q

Thanks Good autor, Now i remember many info.

The .556 sound appealing, very Powerfull compared to pistols

Thank You, this chapter has a Lot of information, and clear the meeting of ratana. Now the mc can do many things on his free time.

Thank You so much

Excellent, all acording to the plan. Mc is very focused. Great effort, You bring me joy and a Lot of entertainment that Will last a good.while

Las fiestas incluso se podrían armar en hoteles de algunas historias, o podrían realizarlas en playas, islas, secundarias inmensas como en discipline rei. Deben existir muchas historias que te pueden motivar a agregarla para darle variedad. Y pueden ser para que liberen tensión y se diviertan

Complejo, porque no veo como puede hacerle visitas a tantas, sería entonces necesario que el organizará grandes fiestas en las que las invité, con champagne y chicas que sepan hacer cócteles, mujeres Dj, Bailarinas profesionales, cantantes famosas o ídols grupos ídol, Chef profesionales, meseras o Maid (Mujeres pueden ser de la academia totsuki o miras si puedes encontrar material, yo solo se de una historia en la que una es dueña de pastelería). También podría hacer eventos deportivos para que se diviertan jugando entre ellas (imaginé una fiesta que dure desde el viernes hasta el martes, entonces en algún día se arma el torneo deportivo para que se diviertan, con los premios podrías hacer algo interesante a petición del Mc o de las chicas para que se animen más personas a participar)

Thanks for your involvment

Nice Quality Thanks good autor

Very unexpected, Now everything is stray, this bring many possibility to the route that the Mc Will choose. Personally Just Boost the stats and launch an overpowered attack agains marcus, he Will never survive and the lightning is the fastest, no one can shot him with the crossbow before he slaughter every person he wants to.

Fake Walls or corridors that contain traps that Will make them teleport to the previous Floor effecttively separating the invasor Forces.

I was thinking about the slow pace of the story, and I believe that this way is much better than Just rushing like many others, You could take your time explaining about the attack of nazarik, like how much Time Will take to Just beat the playera of nazarik, or how the invasora get Lost in the first 4 floors, i mean You could talk about fire tramps, Fake Walls ir corridos that Will take You in Circles, teleport trapos that Will make them yo back to the precious floor in a trap room. Then You could talk about how they understimated the Guardians of the floors Just to be proved Careless and Die. Also You could talk about good ítems that the invaders Will drop and how they Will act after the loss of the item. Then you could talk about the MC beating World Champions, and winning a Title (or Job class or Even an upgrade to World Champion (5) for beat them ) for being the only player to Beat in battle all the other World Champions. Also You could talk about how he goes to other of the nine worlds searching for beter materiales to improve Revenant Body. Or how he search that materials to make another NPC.

Thank You for the chapter Nice revenant

Interesting, Thank you

Thank You for the chapter, the merchant Will soon make all the countries tremble