The way you portrayed each and every character's sketch ,gurl I loved it! Your way of writing is also very good! It's really a great book. To be honest ,I've read many horror and thriller stories but, this one has my heart. I would highly recommend it to anyone who likes horror and thriller.
"Mummy, can I have some pancakes?" little Tyler asks his mother. Linda tries to keep her irritation inside her and tries to put on the best act of the day. "Sure my baby!" she fake smiles as she ruffles Tyler's hair.