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There is only one Ying Yang beast on each planet so good luck.
It should hopefully only be for the first few soul rings when the difference in strengh isn't that large.
Miki or Mika could also be used as endering and slightly embarassing nickname for Mikeal.
I think this look is much better. The muted colors and half mask really work for the more anti-hero or villian like look.
Ra is a good choice as he is one of relativly few God Kings of said divinity. I can only think of 2, and Ameturasu is the other.
This is supposed to be War God though, right?
If Qin Xiao doesn't kill at least a 90,000 year beast for this mission I will be upset. If he kills a 100,000 year beast and it fuses with his current rings that would be a great boost to the average ages of his rings.
I think that it means that it cost 25 atribute points to break his bodies natrual limit and increase his stat beyond 50.
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Author you are confusing conjuration and transmutation. Killua is a transmuter that gives his nen the properties of lightning, Kurapika is a conjurer who conjures chains with his nen. Tansmuters change the properties of something and conjurers make things.
But with blood instead.
It wouldn't make sense for a Chinese wizard to cast spells in Latin. Much better analogy than the authors.
Take your time. Life is more important than hobbies. If you are busy focus on that, otherwise I will always be happy to read another chapter from you. Thanks for the chapter.
I like the twist about his parents and it also gives origin to the strange cube, which is what probably signifies the 'multiply' in the title, and sets a potential plot points for big bads trying to get the cube for themselves. Thanks for the chapter I enjoyed it.
The premis of the story has potential, especially for those who like OP MCs. The English needs some fine tuning but it is readable and the author has already acknowledged this point. I believe that if the author can sit down and come up with a major problem for the MC to try and fix or a goal to achieve, like one of the Beast kingdoms or a monster from the revine try to destroy the kingdom the MC is currently in, as well as some small problem that can be fixed in just a few chapters, like defeating a stonger monster, joining an academy, clearing a low-level dungeon, etc., then it would be easier to peice together a fuller story line. Author, I hope this story can go far and you have fun while writting it, you're doing great so far.
Spirits or Saints are reasonable alternates.