The story got me hooked right away, I am a sucker for isekai genre, having high hope that this will be interesting. It may be generic but all the characters are likeable, looking forward to the world building and thrilling adventures ahead.

Why both Divine and Conceptors are represented by lotus flower? Is there backstory for this? Is Conceptors actually a branch from Divine?

Isn't it suppose to be Wisteria fixing this?

thank you for spotting it :) din't notice the "and" typo will fix it now

thank you. I was planning on concluding all the battles in one chapter but before I knew it I already reach my self target average word count. now the battle is split across two chapters (=__=|||) Please let me know if you prefer a longer chapter or consistent chapter length.

Thank you for enjoying my work, I hope this gives you something to look forward every Monday. :D

I see... Sentence structure and grammar, my greatest enemy. XD

Thank you for your input. The backstory is explained in the next two paragraphs, I separate it to 3 paragraphs because the paragraph is so long >_< Should I combine them for easier reading?

Thank you for the review. I would be happy if you can point out those paragraphs. Your comments will help improve others reading experience.

Thank you. please look forward to chap 3 when it comes out

Glad you enjoyed it. :D

Did Brian felt it as well?

Kevin has sister complex?

This review is written after reading chap7 The story is interesting thus far, characters are likeable, except for the antagonist. The only problem I have is the amount of characters I am bombard with within these 7 chapters. Most of them are introduced without any physical features or demeanour, making it hard to keep track of them. This is what I remember from the past seven chapters. Charlie - handsome Grandma - sweet cupcakes Evelyn - maybe secretly stalker Kevin - soccer simp Noah - Evelyn simp

Previously you use ' ' to signify the character is thinking. Need to be consistent or else readers will be confuse.

From now on I will label Kevin as soccer simp

I felt I was bombard by a lot new characters in every chapter yet none of them is introduced properly. It's fine if they are just side characters that you will scrap after the arc will end, if not then you need to at least give us something to identify them with, like their physical features or demeanour.

Now the male love interest enters the story

I suggest to run some simulation first before writing down the scenes. The bumping into Evelyn accidentally may look normal at first glance but if you actually think about it their reaction are so out of place.

If I bumped into someone with my shoulder the most likely scenario is either one of us stagger. Evelyn is quite athletic to recover so fast her have spare time to pat on Charlie's shoulder