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Don't bother reading until there is at least 250 chapters because nothing really happens from chapters 80-175 just nothing but the writer repeating the same shit every other chapter with the MC just working on his acting skills to trick chicks.

Time Skip until the MC actually does something instead of the usual chinese MC bullshit about hiding his strength. Almost 100 chapters of pure crap and now when something is finally happening the MC still hasn't done anything. This story is honestly a crapfest.

Not too bad of a translation if you can handle some funny chinese elements. Though the mc might be gay with how obsessive he is with kimimaro throughout the story. After chapter 500 the dude straight drops all the chicks in his group and just helps the dudes get strong. So it's probably a reverse harem I guess.

Why is he acting like a kid? I thought he was an old fogey.

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Story was going along pretty well up until Stark came out. As soon as he came out the story stagnated with boring canon plot with even more boring MC actions. The story should just stick to the MC and not literally rewrite what happened in canon as whoever is reading fanfiction should already have knowledge about what they are reading about. Hopefully the story doesn't repeat the same crap again.

Unneeded two chapters

So I guess he's a simp. He could of just mind wiped the part of him making the troll disappear or even appearing while they were in the bathroom, but instead went with the stupid decision and started blabbing about pretty much everything. I guess if you're a female he'll probably do whatever they ask or don't ask, pretty disappointing.

And then the story was ruined. Why did you have to add random oc's that no one cares about. Could have chosen literally anybody that was actually written in detail in the book series but chose the same cliched people.