BarbeBelle

Ty for chapter !

Love this fic and thank you for the chapter !

A good story, while it's true that the writing could be improved it's not to the point it ruin the story. The mc is not an emo who has no friends but is actually a friendly guy which is really cool. In my opinion it could become one of the best wednesday fanfic on this site if its not one already.

Oh sorry for that one then, I still hope you get what I tried to say though but if not no problem I like your story anyway

Yeah you are doing great so far, just sometimes try to ask the ai to go easy on description. For example in chapter 18 there is "watching like a concerned professional" and "a mind like a haunted house" which are really strange things to say so I don't know what you could tell the ai to change those things but if you do I think it could improve your story even more but anyway continue the good work !

May

Nice fic keep up the good work

Ty for chapter, love your fanfic

ty or chapter, I love the fic but please after this don't do more chapters on seirin match they are not the mc of ur story

Love it, but maybe give some spotlight to Katniss she really look like a useless burden right now