Got it. Thanks for the advice! I will keep it basic as it is meant to be then

Just wondering...Maybe the RPG system with skills and all that is just a little too much? What do you think? Would this world work better without that? Or should I go forward with it?

Hey! Author here! I'm gonna be honest and tell you that this is just a personal hobby of mine, so updates are pretty loose. English isn't my main language, and certainly I have no originality, so I honestly don't think this deserves a 5 star. Still, I would love to see you telling me how to improve! And who knows? Maybe I will take this more seriously.

Sorry for taking so long!

Btw, what would you choose? Military Academy or Adventurer's Guild? (Basically a longer training arch for the Academy, or a shorter but much more slice-of-life side with the Guild)

Thanks! I am pretty ok by now

Sorry for taking so long, catched a cold and was freaking out over it lol

Glad you're enjoying it!

Nice, thank you!

This is Anna btw

Still new to Webnovel, no idea how that works lol

Same world, different circumstances. You'll see next chapter, don't worry

I have two things to say: 1) Bruh. 2) I was planning to anyways, but the hair part does make sense to cut it tho. There's many situations where you can get your hair grabbed mid-combat and thrown into the ground or grappled. Still, gonna keep the long hair I think, still thinking about it.

Thanks! I thought of going with it, but I think this is a better way of introducing a clear goal for the MC. Glad you liked it! <3

No, Thank you very much for picking it up!