SilverTiger25

I haven't read many chapters yet but I really liked the story. Keep up the good work. [img=Feeling it]👍 ......................................

Why do all you new writers start writing like this? I'm going to ask the obvious. Does anyone think or talk like this in real life? We rely on Al too much. If it's just for spelling and punctuation errors I understand but it's clearly more than that.

It have problems the years. Sometimes they change. Also the writing style is a bit monotonous. It lacks fluidity. Try reading more novels, from there you can learn how to write better connected text. It is ironic that despite the poor quality of the characters in Chinese stories, the authors write the stories themselves very well. You can try reading some not so bad Chinese works to get inspired.

Started using Al? Please, if you don't feel like writing, just don't. I'm really sick of Al. I think the previous 1-2 chapters were similar.

The story has potential. In my opinion, I would have liked something more original, instead of following the plot all the time. I honestly didn't like the fact that the author weakened Sakazuki's weirdness. Anyway, with his physical abilities, his power wouldn't have been that terrifying at the beginning of the story, certainly incredibly strong but not terrifying. It's a shame that there isn't some childhood arc or more precisely, snippets of his life with training in between during his childhood. I really like his character, but I think you could have done everything much better. And the magma ability has huge potential, I don't know if the author will copy Sakazuki's style from One Piece or if it will be something original.

Thanks for the chapther

Thanks for for chapther.

Thanks for the chapther.

I hope you realize the full potential of the magma quirkiness. And also hope that in the future the flaw of its quirkiness will be resolved.

Thanks for the chapter. For something unique.....Hmm...my patience? I'm a pretty patient person.