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Mist, thunder, water, thunder, wind, moon. These are a few breaths he should have been trying to master, each with an obvious advantage, and one small hole is that he perfectly masters the fire one in 1 ½ years, but takes 2 ½ years for the next two? and not even a comment that he was more difficult to dominate them by the mc. And the breath displacement advantage of sound is laughable close to the possibility of that of thunder
Well the first 40 caps were pretty cool, even though there were some things I didn't like, but I know most of it was character development. But I really thought the nerf in the poser skill was bad, it took at least half of the mood with the novel as it took a lot of his ability as a ghost.
I would put super powers or abilities something like that in today's society but 20 years in the past to already have some structure for me to live in later, I would plant some monsters and then put some random power for me based on the system I created myself and the power to manipulate the nothing, and then I would live in this new world that would probably be a bit chaotic.
Before I was upset with the fact of the rewrite, but reading now I see a big increase in quality and more patience to introduce the character and his beliefs, which considerably improved something I already liked, thanks for the chapter and I hope you keep updating
Thanks for the chapter, I would like to see the protagonist try to make puppets and keep his quirks so they are more useful, and would be grateful if you could prevent the protagonist from being able to use the quirks he stole the energy from, since he doesn't need that I think more suitable for puppets to use them, of course that's my opinion.