ILoveWhatIhate2k
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Eamon chuckled. "You should learn to humble yourself, woman, for soon you will be my bride and bear my child. A prophecy came to me in a dream, and you have a crucial role to play in it. The heavens will grant you and your family everything, so humble yourself and show me the respect that I deserve as your future husband."- ILoveWhatIhate2k1yrCommentedCh 12 Curve 11: Confession and Ritual
- ILoveWhatIhate2k1yrCommentedCh 11 Curve 10: The Test
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I love him already :)
Yul is a fine-looking guy. He has a curly curtains hairstyle; pointed nose; light skin; and small, sharp eyes. He wears the traditional hooded robe of the sorcerers of Sunhonghin (blue-colored robe, white and black belt, combined with leather gloves and boots. Inside the robe is a thin, steel-plated armor, and smooth pants.), and he wields a kendo, an extremely sharp, one-handed sword with ancient Sunshin symbols written on the blade. - ILoveWhatIhate2k1yrPosted
I like how you describe your characters. I can see this is your first story, so I'm looking forward to seeing its progress. You need to be serious with this one. You have a good start for a novel. That's something that most novels are lacking. I'm a fan of fantasy novels. Please be consistent. Thank you!