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Your story is good, but you spend too much time explaining things, and that makes the progress very slow. It's been 5 chapters and there hasn't been any progress; it's stuck in the same place, in the same conversation. I'm giving it 5 stars because I don't want the story to stop, as it has a lot of potential. I just hope you make small, positive changes.

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