Ruscyl

thanks for the chapter

tftc

I would say it is good the only problem i found is how at the start of a chapter you reiterate how Rajah is different and so is the pilot it gets repetitive but otherwise good so far

let him cook. I like the way he has taken it so far I hope to see something great here.

good luck

i am the greatest loser here

story is great would love if more people read it

I would like to see how this goes. good luck.

just stole another authors work. like man come on.