Darth_Nox

I would like to know what Tempest's opinion would be about Raiden, She did like a lot of shit... and kind of got away with it, I always found it strange that the people of Inazuma didn't resent her, not even a single NPC blaming her for the death of a loved one beloved during the civil war.

Do I see an Anemo Vison in Tempest's future? It seems to be the one that resonates with him the most, with all his desire for freedom and such. A good time for her to appear is when he finally frees himself from his troubled past.

This was touching... I actually shed a tear here. Your writing is really excellent author-chan, keep up the good work

Damn author... don't give me hope that Teyvat's purest soul will be freed... I really liked Tempest's attitude, I think we would all try to Free Nahida even with her denying help.,

take your time to recover.

This story was absolutely Cinema! I discovered this story a long time ago in the popular ones and had seen a lot of potential, I was very afraid that it would be just another good Fanfic that would be abandoned like "One piece: Ragnarok". It was one of the best experiences I had on the Webnovel website, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Excellent story, constant updating and a well-developed Protagonist. I hope you don't rush Furina's romance with Tempest, doing something too superficial could ruin the story. I'm very curious to know how Tempest became Admiral, his future relationships with Fontaine's characters, and how he met Nahida.

A really good story 10/10. An MC Kaidou always seemed like a good idea to me, and you executed it masterfully. I just wish Kaidou had actually convinced Yamato to join him, without brainwashing. Oden was an idiot who left the country in the hands of pirates to live a dream even after knowing what they did to the residents, his father and his wife, in addition to knowing who Orochi really is. He was a bad leader, very naive and by placing his own desire for adventure above his responsibility to his country, he brought about its downfall and eventually his own death. It was possible to convince Yamato that Oden was not someone to be admired.

Overall I liked the story, I'm looking forward to chapter 16 for the big reveal that Jiram is a villain.

The story is good but I think the protagonist became too strong in too little time, how will a story have any interesting conflict if the protagonist just snaps his finger and that's it, problem solved.