Overall good book, it could have been longer and had a bit more substance, but it was short, sweet, to the point, and didn't drag on and on trying to spend all of your money for coins.
I knew she was lyin but I thought she had ulterior motives, she was just deceived, now the boyfriend, I didn't really like him but he's the real MVP...
Go get your family!!!
Amazing Story... I love stories from the omegaverse. Your story was very well written, although probably not intentional, I love the name slip-ups, for the most part I knew who eveyone was, but I was stuck on a few characters.