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Kinda garbage insta nerf the comparison of destroying doom an F4 effortlessly to evenly matched with magneto😒 He was so dmn fast last chapter he literally disappears. Unless you made him hold back for whatever reason after he just talked abt killing doom to prevent future trouble. He should have crushed Emma easily causing a backlash imo
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How dumb
He is kinda stupid since he can just casually create a few weapons and get millions of valis
It would seem you need to ignore all the details to read this story
Aren't they like 1k? A stall costs 10k but potions are cheap af I guess
Started off really good but the further you go it's getting boring. His interaction with the girls is uncomfortable. He is portrayed as way older than he actually making you forget that they are f**king 6. I think only 2-3 months have passed with him just building his harem already. Honestly besides the beginning it feels like the story hasn't progressed at all. It just him flirting and meeting new girls which is way to detailed with even different Pov's talking about 6-year-old feelings of love. I think it would much better if the focus stayed on gaining strength and the dungeon and summarize the relationships he's forming until they get older to make it feel less awkward.