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Mia_Kim_01

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um well....all I can say is books are my first love ^•^

2021-02-04 JoinedIndia
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  • Mia_Kim_01
    Mia_Kim_012yr
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    and cut the second 'running', it is in repetition

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  • Mia_Kim_01
    Mia_Kim_012yr
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    how about change the 'it' to 'they' in the first line, that would be more appropriate.

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  • Mia_Kim_01
    Mia_Kim_012yr
    Replied to Ferjenni

    this link is more like a messed up text lol but ok

    Ch 1 A Brand New Day, A Brand New Opportunity
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    It's Magic
    Teen · Mia_Kim_01
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  • Mia_Kim_01
    Mia_Kim_012yr
    Commented

    wow, a psychology PHD man--

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    Remember 1999
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