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Monica_Garcia_0181

Monica_Garcia_0181

Lv14
2021-02-05 JoinedUnited States
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  • Monica_Garcia_0181
    Monica_Garcia_01812yr
    Commented

    Its not keeps. it should be brought or placed the teddy in my room.

    Anna: So, It's Mark, who keeps the Teddy in my room..
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    A Slave To My Vengeful Lover
    Teen · AnnaMark
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  • Monica_Garcia_0181
    Monica_Garcia_01812yr
    Commented

    *How’s your Cramps? This the right way of Saying it.

    How're your cramps.."
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    A Slave To My Vengeful Lover
    Teen · AnnaMark
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  • Monica_Garcia_0181
    Monica_Garcia_01813yr
    Commented

    You should have used Enraged instead of enlarged

    His lord has punished his beloved wife just like this? What made him so enlarged?
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    Loved By a Vampire King
    Fantasy · Anamika_Ana
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  • Monica_Garcia_0181
    Monica_Garcia_01813yr
    Commented

    Remove nonchalantly

    Ayra blinked innocently without understanding her unique power and replied nonchalantly,
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    Loved By a Vampire King
    Fantasy · Anamika_Ana
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  • Monica_Garcia_0181
    Monica_Garcia_01813yr
    Commented

    It should be “how is she alive? “

    Ayra?? How did she alive?
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    Loved By a Vampire King
    Fantasy · Anamika_Ana
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  • Monica_Garcia_0181
    Monica_Garcia_01813yr
    Commented

    You put to many on the contrary and thus.

    On the contrary, Athena was in dilemma as she lost her words and stood still hanging down her head in daze. Jasper felt quite pressured at her tensed up figure thus asked approaching near her a little,
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    Loved By a Vampire King
    Fantasy · Anamika_Ana
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