Thank you for the chapter

Happy 2000 chapters everybody!

Your writing style has definitely improved. The writing at the beginning of the book was a bit… scattered? Like you were writing things down when then thoughts hit your brain. There was nothing wrong with this however it made it feel like I was reading in figure eights. It was a tab confusing but an overall fun ride. Now, on the other hand, it is much more organized. Reading is easy to do and very enjoyable. I quite like the feeling of it being told from the author’s view rather than a standard third-person. I also quite enjoy the descriptions we get however sometimes it gets a bit lengthy and feels more like filler at that point, for example when describing the big villain boss behind Guo Ying. The description of everything is very nice but too much can be detrimental to the fluidity of your story. After all, too much of a good thing is no longer considered a good thing. Overall, I really enjoy this novel along with the little glossary at the end of chapters every now and then. I also like the authors’ notes that we get. I enjoy seeing the main character and his strengths yet I also find it nice reading about the weaknesses and his ability to set boundaries, which is something I envy do to my lack in such an ability. Thank you for all your hard work author, I really like this novel. Thank you for every last letter you put out. Don’t forget to take care of your health and don’t be afraid to take a break when you need it!

I wanna know who’s rating these things.

I would assume it’s blob-shaped. Probably slightly mailable and changes it’s shape slightly every now and again. It doesn’t really have a shape but is still one entity.

I reccomend removing one of the ‘at this point’ because having it back to back, despite being in different sentences, is very reduandant and makes the paragraph hard to read.

Please tell me why I thought she was gonna go after Yi Chen in that last scene 🗿😭

The author said this was the last Evie chapter for a hot minute. Next chapter is Ren. Idk about you but tbh I really liked the small Evie arc, seeing as she is probably the female lead, if you can’t stand a few chapters about her, maybe you really should leave. She’s bound to stick around for a while.

I really do love this novel. I’m not sure why this doesn’t have more reviews, power stones, and attention, because it truly does deserve so much more. I love the main character, and all the side characters have their own depth to them. Their backgrounds, expecially Jie Ming’s (main character) are more profound then it seems. Even though Jue Ming is powerful, he still has his flaws. This novel updated steadily with 1 chapter a day, 7 days a week. it really draws you in, and I look forward to the update everyday. I really hope that this book gets more attention, but for now, I will just have to settle with giving it my own attention. I would definitely reccomend reading this novel.

Nvm just read a little further lol

Who?

She got 50k from catching the kidnappers!

4 Fatty 5 Yun Hu 6 Lin Feng 7 Wu Linyao (or something like that) 8 Yaoyao

Sister, I would assume.

She is from the interstellar era, she probably did not live or was not born on Earth. Rather, she learned the history of her own planet and had only skimmed info of Earth.

Weight on her conscience. Tell me: there is a movie theater. You have two options, buy the ticket or sneak in through the side door and watch the movie illegally. What would you do?

I think they meant quality.

Maybe some kind of ambush. Opposing guilds of the association found a gate and covered it up with the illusion mist. Naturally, the monsters inside will break free. It could be used as an example of how the association cannot protect the people.

That would make sense. Like they figured out what happened to her and created the system to be there for her when she can get out of the fire. After all it said 100% match, so it is likely it was created with her in mind.

Gates*