Good one.

Thanks for the Review, I know that I made some mistakes in the FF, thats why I didnt continue it. I, myself wasnt satisfied with my own story. But right now I sadly just dont have the time to rewrite it since i have many other things to do. I hope that when I have the time to rewrite this story, that you will check it out. :)

Thanks for the Chapter, just found the book and it is really goodIt is so sweet that i think that I get diabetes, and that is a good thing.Rest well author if you are tired and i will be waiting for the next chapter.

I would say there are more people who dont these things then people who do this things.

A really good Show. Can recommend it!

I dont plan him to be super OP just a talanted Jedi, I thought maybe close to master level when order 66 will happen.And maybe he will not even surive order 66 and my Story will End with that :P.

I uploaded it.

just with full orange eyes.

dont really know, i only looked up different face shapes on the internet and i liked this shape the most.

first of all thanks for your honest feedback and for such a long feedback with many points what i can do better. I always wanted someone who writes such a feedback for me since only with that I can get really better im writing. I will also write a reply about the things you mentioned but it will be done later since I only woke up right know and I am still pretty sleppy. :D

sry i will Post it again. I dont know why this keeps happening, i already posted the picture like 3 times and it always deletes itself :P

I see your point, I didnt know it was made by danzo and that it was exclusive for danzo so my bad.

Yeah u can use that as a reference too, what is more comfortable for you.

Thx for the comment, i used Google translator so i dont know if everything was translated correctly. => I try to upload other chapters when i can and feel like it. Right know i just dont really have the time and motivation sadly...

like i said, i think Sasuke didnt sense anything and kakashi and Guy is another thing since they are already ninja. But if u think something different then ut is okay. And Itachi was a genius so, thats also different.

they only know about Naruto, that he is the "Kyuubi" they dont know his parents nor his surname, because that doesnt interest them. If u are so unsatified with my FF then just dont read it. :)

Where did he sense it? He just cried because things around got destroyed because of the Kyuubi.

and why do you think Hiruzen would do anything against Danzo? i mean you could see it in the anime how much he allowed him. And Hiruzen doesnt know that he his the nephew from Minato soooo.

No? I mean i never wrote anything like that and he isnt a sensor with the age of 3 that he could sence the Kyuubi.

First of all thanks for the critic. Now i want to explain what my view is of this and maybe you can understand it. No one knows, that he was related to the Minato, since they wanted to hide it, because the Namikaze name has a lot of enemies. I also think that i wrote in a chapter (could be that I am wrong and it was just and idea, which i still need to write) that his dad that wasnt really famous and not many know of him. This is also why they changed they name, to have no enemies hunting the MC especially when Minato died. Why didnt they adopt naruto? Well, his Mother didnt know that Naruto even survived, since the Hokage said nothing to the village that Naruto was Minatos son, so how should the Mother know about Naruto when she is just a normal villager. And of course the Mc cant just say: hey mom this kid is the son of Minato and Kushina, since he also cant know it. They (the Mother) will find out about in the future but not know. So i personally think that it does make sense but maybe i am just biased since it is my story.