Raul_Overhaul
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Raul_Overhaul4dCommentedHow about making the abilities that are capable by humans integrate into his self. Like catwoman is human so her reflexes are like the epitome of what humans could achieve and if he uses her abilities more and more, his body starts etching that ability permanently in him. Same with lex's intellect.
Ch 2 The Dice System- Raul_Overhaul4mthCommented
So far I love your thought process. Feels like we have similar tastes. I honestly don't like : 1. OP Mc's from the start. 2. I honestly like system novels, but only the ones that show stats or the like. I don't like levelling systems. And I especially don't like systems that give powers from different worlds altogether. 3. I love single FMs and abhor stupidly put-up harems. Reasonable harems are decent. 4. And I also love character and Intellect development.
That's not even the worst part, apart from the godly system he has that let's him gain any ability from any anime and manga ever, the worst part is this fanfiction too treats sakura like shit. As if the original did not do a good enough job of bashing her and showing how useless she actually was by placing her in situations where she'd be the weakest. - Raul_Overhaul9mthCommented
Zenin Maki plssssssssss
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Just a thought, make him have spider spider fruit. Sounds inconsequential but in its hybrid state you can make him have spider legs coming out of his back like iron-spider. You can also have him shoot webs through the spider legs, fingers(like Jess) and surely wrists. Since he also has good reflexes and observation haki he would almost fight like spider man. It's just an idea. No need to implement it.
Ch 26 Chapter 26 - Raul_Overhaul10mthCommentedCh 20 Mr Ouboros
- Raul_Overhaul10mthCommentedCh 10 Not a chapter.
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Just my thought and a suggestion. I think you should remove creeping hunger from the story. I know that sounds wrong as the story's name is creeping hunger. But the object seems kinda useless in the marvel world where there are a lot of ways to gain different abilities.
Ch 5 Midtown High - Raul_Overhaul11mthReplied to eabitx
- Raul_Overhaul11mthCommentedCh 93 Chapter 93: Becoming an Actor?
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and I can write whatever I want in the comment section. I find Zendaya unsuitable so I wrote it. Kate bishop would have been much better.
Just like the granny version of Aunt May, Peter didn't like the MJ in the Tobey Maguire spider-man movies, but this one is a million times better. Which is why he planned to ask her out on a date. Though not today. - Raul_Overhaul11mthReplied to PinGoth
bro it's a fanfic. or bring some other girl. Zendaya is too tomboyish and flat from both sides
Just like the granny version of Aunt May, Peter didn't like the MJ in the Tobey Maguire spider-man movies, but this one is a million times better. Which is why he planned to ask her out on a date. Though not today. - Raul_Overhaul11mthReplied to DarkEdenGod
- Raul_Overhaul11mthCommentedCh 82 Chapter 82 - Erza Scarlet.
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- Raul_Overhaul1yrCommented
why can't it be someone more feminine like Gwen??
Just like the granny version of Aunt May, Peter didn't like the MJ in the Tobey Maguire spider-man movies, but this one is a million times better. Which is why he planned to ask her out on a date. Though not today.