Kendall_

Wow. I got nothing to say. The first part was dope!👏 All I could really say is I'm gonna read this one. Great job author! Keep it up! Keep writing❣️

The synopsis wasn't quite that good but I'm hoping that the author could make it more interesting. But so far it's good, I kinda liked how you expresses the relationship with her father on the first to second part. So that's all, hope the author will improve him/her writing skills even more. Keep writing❣️

5 stars for this! All I could say that this story seems very insteresting and relatable for me. By reading only the first part I could say that this is such a good story, the english was good. The author expressed the lines very well. Good job author! Keep it up!❣️

Reading the Prologue and the first part was quite good. The author seems expressed the story well, especially the relationship between his mother. Overall, it was good. Keep writing Author!❣️

Wow, this book seems very interesting... Reading the first part really hooked me well, I already got curious and excited as well. I'm just hoping her mother don't throw her anime figurines LOL😆. Imma add this to my library, my curiousity is killin' me!😆. Anyways, great job Author! Keep it up!👍💖

I've read the introduction. It was actually pretty good. The way the author delivered or expressed the thoughts is great too. There were no typos, except, I saw one, but the rest were ok. I think the story is pretty interesting.

As I have read the first chapter, I can say that it's damn scary! The flow of the story was good but it's kinda confusing like what you have said in the synopsis. Though it could be even better if you have put the proper quotation like (" ") and (.) 'coz their dialogue were getting lost. The readers might not have notice that the characters were already saying their lines. So as I have said, make it clear as much as possible. There were also some wrong spelling but it's fine tho. Overall it was good, that's all! Hope this feedback will help you improve your writing. Keep writing author!❤️

I must say, the synopsis wasn't really that good but based on the first chapter the author has expressed the main character's situation. The setting was easily to comprehend and the language was also good. Keep it up author!💓

The english was excellent, but I'm a bit confused of the story setting. I hope the author must improve her/his novel with this review. But anyways, keep writing author!

First of all, the English was good. Based on the first chapter I can say that it was well-defined, but if I wasn't mistaken there were some quotation marks that weren't inserted right in the dialogue. I hope it will improve. Keep writing!👍