very funny and interested novel keep it up

very interested keep it up

I mean that, we did think the MC was the Falcon

I meant we did think that it was the falcon

In my native language, IYA means Mom or some kind Female guardian that is well respected

the iron falcon king thought that he isn't protagonist, even we all thought that. then Bam it's the normal Small chick.

Amazing Novel. A hidden Jem. I meant it's a hidden Jem. you better check it out. Everything about the story is great and captivating. the chicken is not op but has amazing ability and unique

what a lovely novel. I like the originality and also how it's a slow pace but kept thin interesting. this will be another Lord Of Mystery if you try harder. keep it up