The introductions are there right away to let you know about the character's basic backgrounds so it isn't overwhelming if you prefer stories that might drag your interest for quite a long time.

Okay I was just at the prologue and let me tell you, I feel like a psycho liking the image the first paragraph provided me. The writing is so detail that I can imagine the fricking scene and the character's emotion. Five/Foive 👌

I feel like a psychopath liking that details and imagining it way too much detail...

For my first impression, the chapter is making me hook into finding out the journey of the character. Just a simple advice, support the book because it ain't a waste of time.

And ladies and gents, that's life.

First of all, let me tell you that how the character views he's surroundings is perfect. His descriptions are deep but the words itself is simple, making it easier for the situation to sink in you. Second, The dialogues are simple and jumps right into it so for people who wants a perfectly paced story, this is the story!

GABRIELLA IS A MOOD!! Ngl as well, I don't know if I should but I notice myself laughing when she describe him like if y'all ain't gonna be embarrass then I will be the one catching it. Anyway, good story and entertaining, for those with broken humor like me, you would laugh by time to time (or giggle whichever you want to do).

The characters are perfectly portrayed without explanation so there are no unnecessary words and it is full with what is happening in the story. The story is "generically" interesting and I find myself reading on and on. Recommended to fans of romance😉.

The story is generic but it is indeed interesting. The character's emotion can be felt while I was reading and in the first few sentences, it unfolds a world before you as it slowly explains the state they're in. 10/10 good story👌.

First chapter, it's interesting and this is my first time to be interested in Y/N pov which seems the case for the first few sections in the chapter. It does not reveal anything yet so you get interested in reading about the world further and further. It is a good story overall.

The story has an interesting concept and I can say it is a unique concept as a fantasy reader. The characters have nice characteristics and the dialogues embodies their character. Overall, a GREAT story👍👍.

The story is good example for its genre and its interesting even for me who barely reads anything like this. The descriptions are pretty self explanatory that I can avoid being lost. Good job author and hope this gets more attention🤞.

The writing quality is to be expected mature and it can really devour you in reading. Good characters and the descriptions. Kudos to the author👏.

The story is interesting and, despite the fact that it is the generic Mafia story, it is interesting that it has a strong female lead character in which can stand on her own. Overall chef's kiss👌

The explanation is perfect considering real life based stories are quite fast paced than fantasy ones(which I usually read). The characters are realistic than anything I've ever read in a BL story.

I'm currently at its 3rd chapter and it's interesting how to see someone portray a musician that's really starting from the bottom. The writing is easy to understand so I was able to understand the feelings of the hardworking and frustrated musician.

The story at the beginning made me think of life as someone young and inexperience to what life outside is. Very recommended to people who want to read something deep.

The story has good details of the character and it is easy to see the fears and empathize with the character. The narration of her life was not confusing and it is all over interesting. Keep up the style[img=recommend]

I was captivated by the prologue. It is a very excellent style of writing and a very good pacing. I really like reading the prologue as we were open to the character's small attitude and the likes.[img=recommend]

The prologue is hooking and the vocabulary isn't deep but it is very professional. Overall the story is captivating and the twists aren't obvious. Nicely done story.[img=recommend]