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Karen_S_Sergent

Karen_S_Sergent

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  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    Will her wings come back?

    Ch 285 The Antidote- Part 2
    altalt
    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    Calhoun wanted to know about a antidote for James. Nice that he asked. Still each one of them are now different beings and Madeline hasnt fully come out to be herself yet! Can a angel and a demon vampire mix? What happens next will be a eye opener for sure!

    Ch 285 The Antidote- Part 2
    altalt
    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    What is the secret that Maddies grandparents know? The breaking glass. They also wanted to know if Calhoun knew something. That he was different? Who will find Markus in the prison or will he get bitten? So much intrigue.

    Ch 256 Awake- Part 2
    altalt
    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    And you have a lot of talent as a writer. I enjoy reading again.

    Ch 179 Chapter 56
    altalt
    Married to the Devil's Son
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    Your writing is very good. I have enjoyed your stories. Others leave me bored after awhile. If you ever need a editor let me know not saying your writing needs a lot of editing but i have found just a few areas. I guess my fault because I use to write years ago and may start again.

    Ch 179 Chapter 56
    altalt
    Married to the Devil's Son
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
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  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Posted

    Im a teacher. I’ve enjoyed your book but at first it needed to be edited. Also chapters are short. Story seems to drag on to a degree. Overall, you do have talent. Keep working hard and you will be a best seller one day.

    altalt
    The Forgotten Princess
    History · Les01
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Replied to Les01

    I’ve read the last chapter that you have written. when will you be adding more chapters?

    altalt
    The Forgotten Princess
    History · Les01
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    I think Elizabeth with become a traitor.

    Ch 241 Elizabeth’s Jealousy (2)
    altalt
    The Forgotten Princess
    History · Les01
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    Bad feeling

    Jack seemed touched by my words and smiled. "I understand princess."
    altalt
    The Forgotten Princess
    History · Les01
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    Surprise when they find out leon’s fleet knows of their plans

    Ch 212 The Queen’s Worries
    altalt
    The Forgotten Princess
    History · Les01
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    Hate kills family

    Ch 211 The Other Half of the Pendant (2)
    altalt
    The Forgotten Princess
    History · Les01
    detail
  • Karen_S_Sergent
    Karen_S_Sergent3yr
    Commented

    Learn all you can princess

    Ch 209 The Queen’s True Goal (2)
    altalt
    The Forgotten Princess
    History · Les01
    detail