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JinVonRey

JinVonRey

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Hello, you can call me Jin. I'm a writer in training if that makes any sense

2021-02-02 JoinedAscension Island
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey10mth
    Posted

    Update Review after 200 chapters.I like the story so far and the pacing is nice. I would say it's more of an action story than a romance one, but no one mind a dragon going mental after some dared approaching one of women. I'm talking about you Chuzuke, you won't get away from the dragon's jaw!

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    The dragon's harem
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey1yr
    Posted

    I like how we got more mommies than harem members (I read up to chapter 15), and I like that. I hope to see more of the dragon side as they are set up to be an important thing. And I like dragons a lot.

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    The dragon's harem
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey1yr
    Commented

    Rip and tear, until it's done.

    Dragons are nicknamed the doom bringers for how much destruction they cause. [R-DOOM] Mean the chapter is one massive fight. Listen to some action music while reading (^^)
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    The dragon's harem
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey1yr
    Commented

    This is going to have a lot of blood

    "Alice, please be careful. There have been words about bandit attacks lately..." A woman said to her eldest daughter with a worried face.
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    Blood Raid: Resurrection
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Commented

    All that experience?

    600,000 experience points!
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    The Legendary Mechanic
    Games · Qi Peijia
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Posted

    The story was good until the author decided to give up on it, I just hope nothing bad happened to him. Such good potential and I hope it won't be wasted.

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    Succubus Slayer: All My Girlfriends are Demons
    Fantasy · Skalla
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Posted

    The story is unique, and the plot is progressing nicely. As each event leads to the next one! The MC isn't dumb nor dense, he also knows how to handle his harem well. The world Background seems to have a lot of mysteries around it with each new thing we meet, more about the world gets revealed. Character designs are amazing in my opinion and I hope to one day get to see arts of them, especially Selena. The story seems simple but with each event, it becomes more complex to deal with and I want to know what will happen after the big event that was mentioned from the start (I'm trying my best to avoid spoilers) The stability of updates is amazing with at least 1 chapter a day and the author said he is going to make it 2 chapters a day and that is just commendable for his first work! Writing quality is where he fell a bit short, as grammar needs some work but it wasn't enough to bother me. I will definitely like to see this story rise,

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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Commented

    I would want to progress with the story and have the senses when Alice arrives. I'm going to leaves a review as well! Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 35 Jewelry.
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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Commented

    Here the twig, 😂😂

    "Shut up twig, That was an order! restrain and drag him to the barracks!" Jack shouted, "The two girls are coming with me now as well!"
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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Commented

    Oof,

    The lazy dragon loved to lure travelers into its lair by showing off its treasures and eat them when they least expect it.
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Commented
    This cave was in fact the lair of one of the lesser dragons called Niria. Like all dragons, Niria also had the fetish of collecting gems and treasures. However, Liam knew that it also had an additional fetish.
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Equate

    I didn't expect to see Rachel name here and, damn did it bring the bad memories. Kick her in the face! !!

    *****
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Astemporal

    Just fixed it, thanks for your support !

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    Dragon Heart System
    Fantasy · JinVonRey
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    Thanks, I won't drop it!

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    Dragon Heart System
    Fantasy · JinVonRey
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    Yeah, it's broken!

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    Dragon Heart System
    Fantasy · JinVonRey
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    Thanks,

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    Dragon Heart System
    Fantasy · JinVonRey
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    Oh... That was supposed to be "heat"...

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    Dragon Heart System
    Fantasy · JinVonRey
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Lost_Ling

    Yeah, I know. I was about to put a random number but than thought of that.

    "Applicant number 69...ahem... Simon Rotgar! Are you ready?" She asked through the microphone.
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    Dragon Heart System
    Fantasy · JinVonRey
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Replied to Lost_Ling

    Thanks, I will surely take note of that. I will double check the chapters as well make the system a little bit simpler Honestly I made the system like that as I feared it making the Mc op before he reached a certain milestone. Thanks.

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    Dragon Heart System
    Fantasy · JinVonRey
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  • JinVonRey
    JinVonRey2yr
    Commented

    Take your book and eat it!

    The instructor looked at him with raised eyebrows, the first sign of her being able to actually display any sort of emotion. In her five years working as an instructor, this was the first time someone with no ability had rejected the book.
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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