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Even stones will blush seeing him now
Sorry to say that but at this point the story would be way better whithout leonell he better change fast and get that book back to make up for his stupidity because at this point he is just a useless leach to ren and worse of al he constantly try to bring annoying characters back when its obvious that ren don't want to talk to them anymore 😮💨 sorry just need to bring out my frustration its sucks to see an interesting book becoming so bad
Hey i think you misunderstood the [+100] is from the rank 4 artifact not from the attributes points 🙂
Man got his priorities straight
Dragon butcher could be fun
The story is not unreadable but just annoying to constantly read about random characters that come out of nowhere for so long its like watching an action movie and at one point the action stops and you see 30 minutes of a street vendor selling hot dogs that wouldn't make sense right no one would like something like that but its the feeling i get when is see the pov switch It's not like i will stop reading the story or that it's bad but i hope that stops in later chapters
If it goes on like this we wil see his evolution in probably 500 ch something like that This novel need an underestimated mc tag everyone is gonna be 3th/4th order when he finishes his evolution (sorry for bad grammar i'm not eng )
yeah his requirements are just ridiculous to become a second order it make no sense that he need to kill that many 3th orders + control al of china I mean come on for the 3th level he wil probably have to kill 100 x 5th orders + full control of earth and for the 4th the whole milky way galaxy if this go on like this 😅 (sorry i'm not eng i tried my best )
In my opinion the whole part of the story with the spirit walking was unnecessary for the story and the kid even more so and especially now that the author confirmed that they wil meet again you could just close that part here and say that she went somewhere and lived a normal life whit the kid I stopt reading a lot of other good stories before because the mc had children way to early in the story or that he didn't want one and stil got one I hope he wont be anything important in the story and that we wil only see him once if you plan to make something important out of him this book sadly isn't for me But until now the book was an enjoyable experience thank you 😊 (Sorry for grammar errors i'm french/dutch)