I may or may not use that the next time I give him a nickname :D

question is, since i haven't revealed his race yet. Should I make him asian or not...

The thing is about the capture is that I planned it all along as part of the plot to develop Wade's unyielding character. If I didn't add a part of hardship in his life, would it make sense for him to be indifferent? Also, you can think of this as a no pain, no victory arc where he gets captured, tortured, and comes out of it stronger. If you want a TINY spoiler, it's that he's going to use this experience as a way to train his so-called "killer instinct". Every plot has an explanation and this is mine for his character and skills. I created a future chapter that used his aura and it got me thinking. Why would I create something with no explanation whatsoever. This is why I started this arc in the first place. I hope you understood. Anyway, I'm happy you enjoyed my novel. :D

compliment or complaint? if it's a complaint, tell me what I can improve on and I'll improve on it in future chapters. I'm a new author and haven't taken much English language lessons so learning more is good.

Don't worry, just assume that the man with the brown sweater from before is Nix and he has talent in tracking so It makes sense that he found Wade because Wade was careless in this arc.

the thing is is that he's a simply skilled gang assassin. He hasn't made a name for himself, isn't some kind of professional, and simply does it for a living because it's one of the only profitable skillsets he has. Of course, he will train his body to resist these kinds of poisons later on. Also, training your body to resist poison needs you to administer small doses over time if we're talking about a normal person. Of course, Wade will evolve his body to be immune to most types of poison later on. So all in all, that's why he was captured so easily. He was also very confident during this time and this broke his confidence which is an essential part of my plot. :D I hope you understood what I mean.

I'll give myself a 5 star because which author wouldn't. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Anyway, I'll post one chapter every two days from now because I have an increased workload this month. Once I have more time, I'll write 1 chapter a day. I hope you enjoy my novel. Oh. One more thing. If any of you have any questions or complaints, post it in a review or comment and I'll see what I can do about it. I like writing so I'll do my best to entertain all my readers. Peace. -DarknessApproaches

Good book as it is right now, could use a few more word choices but other than that, it holds potential enough for me to read it. Hope it actually gets good later on though.

I was thinking of adding that later on but wouldn't be a bit fishy for there to be a giant casino in a small village in the middle of nowhere? He'll be moving to a big city later on in a few chapters so you don't need to worry about that. :D

yep I need experience.

he'll be making more "drugs" soon enough

Yes it is quite hard to write but I always take my reader's wishes into consideration. My next book will be a harem so you don't need to worry about that. I could make him have a temporary harem in this book but later on it wouldn't really make sense so I'll lay off on that idea for now.

well then I'll make the story have a bit more action then :D

I could make it a harem but would it make sense that his indifferent attitude would care for them? I'm planning to make a volume 2 of this book once I finish it but it'll be an entirely different genre. Maybe then I can make it a harem if his attitude changes during my plot setup. However, right now in this first volume, there isn't much hope for it being a harem. Also, I'll make a new book once I'm done with volume 1 of this book to take a break and it'll probably be a harem.

First of all, he starts at the game's release as per when he bought the necklace in chapter 1. Secondly, the reason I put R-18 is because he will have a girlfriend but no harem. There will also be no casual flings or one night stands neither will there by solo romances, ntr, or girls that have been raped. In the third or fourth chapter you will see a girl thanking the mc for saving her. However, the mc will only open his heart to one person and that person is not that girl. This is for clarification that many people think will happen to the mc's love life and so on so forth. Also, I have decided to limit the mc's plot armors to give him a overpowered start but he will have to win on his own power later rest assured.

I appreciate the support. I've just started writing so I've been looking into various writing videos and such. The more chapters I write the more I see that I can improve so keep reading! :D

I'm guessing my suspense was good? :D taking those language arts classes on suspense really paid off huh?

it bites...

I may have hinted at this a bit before when he didn't choose a god but if you want a spoiler right now I can tell you why he didn't choose a god. Also for information's sake, god's merely give you bonuses and can give you favor somewhat like Wade's plot armor but a bit weaker. I have made Wade not choose a god as a balancing feature as well as a way for him to get stronger in the future.