Racquel_Mcdonough

This is where you have to remind yourself that its a novel and fiction to boot but even so a little logic goes a long way when fleshing out a plot. So FL didn't test her first team member to make sure he could control his newly awaken power before taking him out nor did she test the other 3 who had no power and took them out to battle without training all of whom knew how to use their newly acquired power but now we get to a point where they decide to test a new member to this extent does comes off illogical. The entire novel to this point lacks background or world building so you get what you get. It's a free read for me so I thought to give it a shot. I'd be peeved otherwise

Thanks for the helpful review. It gave me an idea of what to expect which makes it easier to decide if starting is worth it. This is how a review is meant to be. Helpful without ruining the plot.

omg, what a gem of a find. loving our leads right out the gate. I can wait to read more

I kind of expected that our dear author would have the girls doing stuff for the wrong reason up front but it tells alot. she wants to get close to him but her dad objected so she has been trying to keep her distance. still think they all have time to grow into their own

It would seem she really doea not have feelings in that regard towards him but as she said her grandmother prod her towards it so she is thinking she does. I could have skip this chapter. I really am hoping this doesn't turn into a long drawn out boring read fill with puppy love fillers.

Dear author Chap 13 and 14 is a bit confusing with the sequence hopefully you can clear that up.

dear author I haven't started reading and was debating if I should or not but reading your response that it's not an harem type novel i will give it a chance. I am honestly tired of the harem and just want to enjoy a good fantasy novel. I love romance novel but getting tired of reading so many that can't make their novels shine without the harem. I'm now looking forward to reading.

what a waste chapter. it felt like a filler and added no progression to the story. 11 yr old misunderstanding in the sense of adults and only on the females part is fine but didn't need an entire chapter especially when the author lead us to think the cousins all knew that Luna has a thing for him for a lack of better words but now she is into him? please no harem dear author.

I really hope this doesn't gets ruin by turning into a harem. it is doing pretty well, with so many males in it the author really don't need to turn it into an harem type novel. I'm this deep into the story and hope I am not disappointed.

I hate when the change name for English ones. the worst part is not being able to keep the names straight and using both names intermittently