ok i love those kind of jokes "we have a problem" okay what's the problem. then the person explains the plan and your like "oh was it this?" then there like "no no no thats easy the problem is this" and it's something really simple

my favorite chapter so far .

i love it

i was thinking the same thing. im enjoying it but wanted slightly more time with a few things. so that way it feels more accomplished? not sure what i mean by that but like something similar to that nature.

Okay. So i just finished chapter 25 .and it was dope. the story is pretty engaging and it made me want to keep reading. and the backstory of a few characters is dope like the author didn't need to go into details about certain things and they did and i really enjoyed it. a few things that catches me off guard is the transition between certain character POV. or just going into quick flashback scenes. these aren't that bad. just slight things i think the author could improve on. but it is their writing style. oh. also like the dates and time at the beginning of each chapter. that actually might help me more if i actually read them all the time. but i do love the story. and i need to catch up before i do another review. as stated just finished chapter 25