That's a very short chapter.

I like the originality in it, but I do notice some concepts that are taken from other stories, just, reimagined and different to the point where it's not 'copying' the story. They took their way to adjust the story, by adding more context on what truly is going on. The characters are great, it actually makes me focus on the side characters rather than the main characters. The writing quality is decent, still needs some adjustments here and there. But overall it's great.