Perrin58
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I love to read . Thinking I might write a story soon
2021-02-01 JoinedUnited States
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Perrin589mthReplied to HarsShibaCh 13 Conflict- Perrin589mthCommented
your development my be slow ,but it reads well .. there is a trade off there !!
I realized that I've been stretching this arc for too long, and the main character hasn't had much character development, so this lead to that. - Perrin589mthCommentedCh 35 Guilt
- Perrin5810mthCommented
did you mean survive,not surprise?
The voice was actually Iris' own will that took the form of the aura of the healing ability in order to make her own subconscious understand the situation she was in and make her do the necessary steps in order to surprise. - Perrin5810mthCommentedCh 30 Hidden Quest
- Perrin5811mthCommented
place your bets , place your bets!!!!my bet is .01
Irio had 0.1% - Perrin581yrCommentedCh 77 Hidden Dragon
- Perrin581yrCommented
where I know you have to go to a world venue and incorporate the players into your story what happened to the basic mechanic we were following all of a sudden he's got new gear we know nothing of seems like you're glossing on him and going to the rest of the world
Ch 148 The Wind Rises - Perrin581yrCommented
ok what are the dailka are they the one that keep the vampires in line and force the rules?
As Leo looked over at the two students, a thought soon planted itself in his head, 'Is there an actual threat right underneath our noses that is probably far larger than the Dalki?' - Perrin581yrCommentedCh 5 No Ability