Aetherial_Shadow

says it is expired or invalid for me. not sure if its just discord messing up or something else

It's still messed up

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Hey, you might want to edit this chapter. it's repeats the same thing several times over and there are a few spelling errors as well. Could just be an upload error in guessing.

It's still repeating itself for me when I read it

Yeah that to. And nice to find another avid reader on here

I enjoyed this chapter overall. But there is a ton of grammer mistakes that makes it hard to want to read. There were a lot of other chapters I feel like should be revised to fix grammer mistakes as well. If you don't have a beta reader, have you thought about using grammerly to help with grammer mistakes?

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Np