I meant a mistype. It should be weak

Thank you for the revied but I'm still not half way the novel. brb

oh. yea they manage their own believers as well. I understand.

You do know that I'll write like 5 or more sentences in my review right? anyways ignore the first statement, I'll have to git gud in writing and if reviewing stuff then I'm in.

My headache's acting up. I was late night editng some thmbnails for some videos. Wait. We're doing a review here? OKay. since my mind is hazy and my stream of thoughts are messy. I give this review the feeling of danmachi. Surprising story at the start but can adding more depth and content before the reason of his grandfather's suicide. Adding some flavor on that part can pull up some readers with their connection to their grandparents. maybe adding a little bit of content like dipping some hints and thoughts like actions before doing the act. like watering the plants taking the meds or something. The writing quality is as good as it's idioms. The written statement does give paths for the reader to walk upon. And as you can see in me writing this review. I ma trying to recall parts in the novel. that grips or catches my attention. The thing about spoilers alert. that she was behind the caravan made me think she may be a coward. I think it's written there that she would run if there were a bandit to come along? I might be mistaken. Well it also works both ways. If she is on the back. she could sneak behind the caravan and ambush the bandits. Because you know bandits always blocks out the front. the characters scene of her wearing armor and guards stopping give it off the fantasy feel of danmachi. as seen in danmachi. peaople wear armors. All in all. it's a great novel to start off if it's in the prequel timeline of danmachi or after the timeline of danmachi. One question tho.. where are the gods?

Interesting.

proofreader mousekun here. blacksmith is an occupation try forge and refine or repair if you could. btw source of refine came from game goddess kiss ove generation

proofreader here. apparently 7 days have no privileges. pls retort me if you found this unfunny

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